First What Now Ancillary

 

Peer feedback:
The feedback that we got was that there were too many fonts and that it seemed to disproportionate. This made us think that we needed a dominant font which was consistent throughout both the Digipak and the Print Advert. We were complimented on our strength of image and content. NME and Billboard, are written with too big a font. After receiving this feedback we have decided that in making improvements to both ancillary tasks we will make them simpler. They seem to be too jumbled and therefore we will get stronger images to give across meaning rather than more writing.

What Now Rough Cut

This is the rough cut of our music video.

Peer Feedback:

"You should have more close up shots of the artist because Rihanna's music videos are about selling the artist therefore, there needs to be more shots of Rihanna. You also need to have Rihanna doing more of the 'diva' 'over the top' performance as she is well known for demanding attention to attract audiences. There was also the issue of the tripod being seen in the shadow shots of Rihanna so this will need to be changed"